Vote for the Monthly Ticket!

Here's the edited translation incorporating all expert suggestions:

It's the end of the month, tomorrow is the last day. Monthly passes will expire if unused.

Alright.

Actually, I didn't mean to ask for votes, just wanted to share some thoughts.

Dalong's performance has been excellent, which has left Lao Bai feeling a bit unbalanced. He wants to write well but has somewhat lost his direction. He tried to enrich the background of the story and depict aristocratic characters, but it seems to have failed?

When writing these emotional chapters, there are three fears: one, being accused of padding; two, making the intimate scenes feel awkward; three, failing to strike the right balance.

Before writing, there were constant deletions and revisions. After posting, reader feedback led to more tweaking, yet it never feels satisfying.

But not writing at all? For an old bachelor like Lao Bai, it's downright suffocating. So, there will be side stories—extra chapters in the "Extras" section to make up for the steamy scenes. They won't appear in the main text. Those who dislike romance can skip to the farming chapters, while those who enjoy it can check out the extras.

Everyone wins—how great is that?

Lastly.

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